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I've had too much
Today is done
Don't think about life that's just begun
Get home, get the rope
Don't have any more hope
I'm going to pull until I can choke
Tying the knot
Controlling the plot
Knowing how this story will end: I'll rot
Slipping the knot around my head
One thought: soon I'll be dead
Maybe after some more red?
Slip out of it slowly
Grab the blade off the trolley
Thinking about all that's holy
One more thin line
Oh, now that's fine
Now let's try this one more time
Stand on the chair
Kick my feet in the air
Won't have any more pain to bear
Today is done
Don't think about life that's just begun
Get home, get the rope
Don't have any more hope
I'm going to pull until I can choke
Tying the knot
Controlling the plot
Knowing how this story will end: I'll rot
Slipping the knot around my head
One thought: soon I'll be dead
Maybe after some more red?
Slip out of it slowly
Grab the blade off the trolley
Thinking about all that's holy
One more thin line
Oh, now that's fine
Now let's try this one more time
Stand on the chair
Kick my feet in the air
Won't have any more pain to bear
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This was written as an awareness for teenage suicide. No teenager should EVER have to be driven to this. I've been here before, and it wasn't pretty. Please help to stop suicide
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Been here before. It's not a fun place to be, and I'm glad people are trying to raise awareness.